well, the story could be good... if there was development. i stopped reading after 60 chapters, and only a single day passed since MC transmigrated, there is WAY too much inner monologues. Another problem is FMC completely changing after MC f*cked her, she went from smart ice queen to stupid 4 y/o child, and her sister suddenly has split personnality.... everything goes, there is no logic nor stability
I think it's a very interesting novel.The dialogues and speech delivery are written very nicely. The characters and the plot has been described with a very interesting flow. Keep the pace, you are doing very well!!
It is a fairly good read. The beginning of it is pretty slow and as a result can be quite the turn off. However, there is enough substance at the beginning to make it not feel like a total slog. At a certain point the MC starts progressing very fast and as a result kind of makes up for the lackluster beginning. Although there are not parts that particularly fall flat, there are some that are worse than others. But unlike other novels, you don’t need to worry about slogging through any parts. The MC does have a fairly large amount of butt-pulls and plot armor but it doesn’t impede the quality of the story too much. The world building is pretty good but there are certain parts that aren’t done well. For example, it talks about multiple continents yet the entire world is explained rather poorly. One last critique is that the power scale is unbalanced. The final level of the world has too few people and the people at the border to that level have a wide disparity in skill. Overall I would still recommend this. Read until about the Grand Examination, if you don’t like it by then leave it.
A good VR game novel. MC wasn't OP from the start, but I can see him become one. There's also some mystery. Author's writing is also improving gradually. I don't know if much of the concept in unique or not, but I am seeing some of them for the first time. And its really good. That's all for now.PS: Can't comment on FL as they haven't played much part till the latest chap yet.To Author: If you are gonna do harem, don't include more than 3 girls. Thank you.
All it is action decent if you want that but I just don't like when a author puts false tags smh... I mean its crazy how some author just throw random tags on a book I don't get it.
hellow everyone! what are you waiting for?! don't waste your 5 EXPERIENCE POINTS and give me a shameless review already XD 😆if you want another 5exp you can comment as well all bunch of trash talks or whatever you like 😅but i assure you, this novel isn't that trash and you may also like it if you read it now 😊anyways, that's all i have to say now hehe. good luck everyone! 🙄
Yea this novel is great from the start but the more you read the more you lost the drive to continue. Only the system and the abilities he create makes the novel interesting but his life is not so much.
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