Heyo crazy cronie here,review on 29/03/2021 @chap27 (released chap till date: 27)review divided in: Short reviewLong review IMORatingsConclusionWarning (includes spoilers) short review: Gives you 'Accept disciples and become stronger' and 'History's no one founder' vibes. AND LET ME SAY IT ONCE AGAIN, THE REVIEW IS BASED ON JUST 30 CHAPS!long review: pros: 1) Even though the story isn't original, this is still a fresh read since this ain't the type of plotline WN authors generally pick coz it's a lot more difficult.2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro.)3) MC is smart unlike other novels where the main trait of the mc is idiocy. No plot armour saving MC's ass, mc knows to hide, to run.... Atleast for now that's the casd4) I love the pacing of this novel. Literally the events are not postponed forever and takes place when you need them. 5) Side chara gets the deserved attention. Even though still less than 30 chaps I know the author is giving them the screen time required.6) Author interacts with the readers... Listens to their ideas, opinions and advices and uses them, a big plus compared to those who just take many criticisms and advices comments as malice....7) Maybe because it is new but the updates are stable.. and it is even 10 chaps a week!! Something which I love!!cons:1) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Too much info? Author sometimes give more than info dump required. (I cut my entertainment points coz of that.)2) A light hearted novel with almost zero tension as said above. (This can both be a pro or a con depending on readers. To me a pro since I was searching something like this.)3) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Nothing can be said clearly about world. We don't exactly know where the plot is heading... But then again WE ARE JUST 30 CHAPS IN!!4) MC doesn't have really have any ambition. Like*SPOILER* he just gets a disciple coz the system said so... The system didn't threaten him and neither it was shown that mc wanted to become really strong!!That maybe coz it's just 30 chaps and maybe revealed in the future.5) [NOT REALLY A CONS] Easy to understand writing with little bit of typo errors and some grammatical mistakes which are negligible. IMO:- A little less info dump would be better... - A little ambitious MC would be a big plus for this novel, like creating your own clan/group/organisation... Just a lil bit of hint would be fine ... Even something like wanting to live a carefree life that's why making your disciples strong is also okay As long as my opinions doesn't spoil the plotRATINGS: writing: 8/10 (con-5)update: 9/10 (pro-7)plot: 8/10 (pro-1&2, con-1&3) characters: 8.5/10 (pro-3&5, con-4)pacing: 8.5/10 (pro-4)dialogues: 8/10 (pro-5)entertainment: 8.5/10OVERALL: 4.2/5 Conclusion:This novel has excellent potential! I am just worried like many other WN authors, he doesn't stop updating... I am seriously waiting for more updates:). Thanks for the chapters!If possible pin this review @PurpleSpring bruh!Next review after chap 100WARNING: *SPOILER (not exactly)*- MC till now seems to be neutral. Neither hero, nor villain... Should have been anti hero but even that isn't mentioned...-
For those who expect something new, I can only say don't even waste your time trying this story. It's a usual reincarnation story where old monster who didn't give a singe fuc.k about lives and wished to reach peak of cultivation reincarnated and become, well as you can easily guess became a family loving child. As in almost all those type of stories Mc who was loner and wished to achieve peak of cultivation by any means, reincarnated into body of a boy who has a family and yeah as usual he got attacked to them instantly and can't think of leaving them alone and staring his own journey. And also Mc don't act as old monster who lived hundreds of years, he acts like 15 years old boy and nothing more. So if you're looking for story with protagonist who acts like he should, then you're in a wrong place. Hope this was helpful for some people who don't want to get disappointed. Don't have anything about stories with puss.y Mc because alot of people like them, but for me those kind of Mc's are cancer.
For me, after reading 20 chapters, it's good novel. I voted for it for 2 reasons:1) Genre about VRMMORPG with returning to the past2) the other novel had name and cover that whould love females, but not males.P.S.: and I think those females are angry, as they lost in voting.)
When Tsubaki saw the van with a loud screeching sound, her mind blanked out for a moment. At that time, a vision flashed in her mind making her dizzy. She was lucky to be able to dodge the van during the crucial time. Her body flinched at the uncomfortable feeling.
His face changed to an almost mask-like appearance if compared it looked like a hollows from Bleach no rather it looked like Hiyuri Sarigakis top part up to the jaw but with 2 horns and without the colored red bit but his jaw both top and bottom looked like the jaw from Halibel while his arms and legs elongated a bit and the ends of his fingers became more claw-like with spikes at the ends of the fingers
At this point any type of crime was punished harshly as there wasn't any time to put them in a police car and take them to the jail. All of them were rounded up at various spots where the army was and cuffed before being ordered to lay on the ground.
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