Magic Tricks and Hidden Secrets

J’ai fini le premier chapitre de le roman, la parcelle et le dévelopement du personnages est fantastique. L’auteur a décrit les relation des personnages clairement et j’aime ton roman.

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Now I have only read the first segment of the book so I have not seen how your skills have progressed but for the whole werewolf thing (like descriptions or actions like instead of ‘furry hand in his chest’ something like ‘clawed fist thrusted through his chest’ ect) i would suggest you used more violent, beast like description and maybe look at some books of the genre.I would suggest looking at the book on this site beast: reborn and although your books may lack the same themes (like how in that book werewolves are more ‘beast than man’ and yours seem to be more human) it is a godo source of inspiration and werewolf-y, I would also suggest looking at the latter chapters since once apon a time that author was also unskilled.And finally thank you for all of your hard work and I might have said too much (if you haven’t guessed) i’m very passionate when it comes to wolves (especially books about werewolves).

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very interesting story!!!! already read it on faloo till chapter 60 If I could would've read all of it!i want to know more about dust, and how he uses silica.

THIS IS SOOO GOOD, I love the way you write, looking like re:monster, a novel that I love, congratulations for such a great novel, I hope you never drop it

Nie Li rubbed the back of his head. "I haven't been using the basic cultivation technique you taught us a year ago."

For Ye'er, it was all forTàizǐ diànxià's sake, she wont take a risked and break her own heart for nothing.