Magic Hitman

I must say your writing style deviated from the common practice (using Author's Note a bit too much, and the dialogues are done differently). It takes a tremendous amount of time for people to shift their preferences, so be warned. overall, the story is good.

just finished reading all the chapters, pretty cool book. I do recommend reading this with some cool music in the background, it makes the experience like 10x better.

A good novel, writing quality is excellent. But I would say a bit more world background would make the novel a very good choice. Over all, a new novel that would catch your attention very fast.

This book is good. It has a good plot yet lacks many things. There needs to be less author notes in the middle of the story, it is rather annoying. Maybe also fix some grammatical mistakes. I’d advice grammerly. Try adding more of the setting so we can imagine where it is taking place. The character design is interesting keep it up. Overall it’s good, just needs polishing.

Very cool, I only don't like a few things, like you use authors notes a bit to much, the power system was explained in 1 chapter instead of throughout the story, but other than that it's good, I highly recommend.

Lots of POV switches and A/N. But, besides that, it is a good story so far. I really like the world and how you incorporate the power system.

I saw your book on Ashy's discord though I don't talk much, love the book and I hope you continue writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Okay, so kinda a weird story.

1. Writing style is weird, but unique. Only downfall to it is that there are so much POV changes that you sometimes forget who is talking as the author introduces a lot of characters, but we don't have time to figure out who is who yet.

2. Can't really rate this as it is a new novel.

3. Story development seems really forced, and the Asomethingsomething for some reason explained everything to the MC instead of just forcing him to become a hitman which just felt really forced and not real.

4. Character design is okay, there hasn't been anything unique yet, so a solid 4.

5. World background is the best part, as the power system is something I've never seen before. Really awesome.

Overall, a good novel.