Mag Beast Leveling

nice book worthy reading , keep it up dia

Seems like a decent story, but just not for me. It's written in a cartoonish/anime way, as though I should read it while visualising what's written like a cartoon or an anime. A lot of minor details are left out, and it feels like things happen in defiance if reality. Feels like people teleport all over the place, turn into dust clouds when they run, cough up blood from irritation, etc. On top of all this, everything feels like it's all over the place, with no solid connection between events that follow each other, or logic to the encounters and flow of the story. While the writing quality is quite good, with few errors, the story doesn't seem like it has any substance. The characters behave way too goofy for my tastes. A lot of it feels illogical in that way. I kinda like the premise, but I feel it's poorly executed. I read up to chapter 15, and I don't know if it improved later on, but that's how iIfeel about it. But good luck to the author, and I hope your novel goes well.

A good story overall with an interesting plot. I’m definitely adding it to my collection . Keep it up

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I really like the novel overall, but man you gotta work on your writing skill.I know this is your first book, but yeah its pretty decent and worth a read because of its uniqueness.xD