Madam, She Has A Tender Heart

After Havel's foot crossed the vague border between forest and desert, something frightening happened.

He never wants to take a lover because all of them are too greedy. Besides fame and money, what they wanted the most is the power over his name.

Based on what I've seen, it's quite interesting but there's an issue. The writing style is too formal for me and makes the chapter less flexible and engaging. Maybe you could reduce the formality but that's just my opinion. Aside that, everything is good, the MC is growing and developing. I love it! Give it a quick read, it's not a bore.

look promising novels man I am laughing at these funny chapters 🤣😂 man

As the author, this is shameless, but depending on how many ideas for this novel I personally execute, this review may change

author can you please make more continuous novels not like those last two novels which had so many realms it was hard to remember and the value of each realm was diminished I hope this one isn't like those

@Aechauhan, one thing I would like to mention, it's likely that this story is going to be viral, but you are capable enough to do so, for me, the story is going out well, and as Ms. Kannojia mentioned, English could be enhanced, and the story could be more lively, all the way it's good but still it can be more hooking than it currently is.