Madam, She Has A Tender Heart

Good premise but bad execution. the story itself is just a repetative cyle of the Mc trying to make his dungeon bigger and better, and the outladish actions of the gamers for comedic effect. rinse and repeat then call it a story. If you are looking for something unique look elsewhere, you have been warned. but if you got nothing to read its good enough to stave off boredome.

This looked interesting and stayed for a long time at the top of the voting pool. It's disappointing that it did not get picked to be continued.

Love the story very much! Great and neat translation! Correct and clear words and usage! Grammatically correct and easy to understand! Overall, a great work!!

quality of this translation is very low. sometime MC become he or she. it's very confusing to read. I lost few of my brain cell......4/10...

Man, it is too short, I'd like for this story to be longer... And tbh it coulda been longer...there is a lot of potential and hard work in that story.

Nicely done although the story is slow in progress. Over all the story is good but I can day it's quite interesting to read.  In my preference its just lacking a little bit in story telling. The jump in of scenes are one of those. But just a little.

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I Like the name and the intriguing world building author keep it up I am getting hooked