LUNAR SHADOWS: THE MYSTERIOUS FIGURES ON THE MOON

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Maybe she saw me stunned so she threw me her creepy smirk. Her sharp teeth were shown and I couldn't help but shudder at her not beautiful smile.

"You've been awfully quiet. What do you think of the whole plan?" Raul asked me.

"And why is that?"

Tang San covered Xiao Wu's mouth, pulling her to his side, in a low voice recounting the previous affair next to her ear.

"Why not just as soon as possible?"

'No, this was no time to think about the past. You need to focus on the present, Seryu Ubiquitous!' was what she thought when she saw that the man with the light sword had copies of himself and one of them was approaching Okuyasu's back.

The story is empty and unclear, with your protagonist assuming a different role in every chapter and the world-building constantly shifting—from a sect member to an emperor. There's a lot of repetitive content seemingly added just to increase the word count. The novel feels nonsensical, and your attempts to showcase the character's intelligence and depth through flashy titles and grand words do not make them seem smart. Perhaps writing intelligently is a challenge for you. I even left a comment on chapter nine to draw your attention to these issues, but it seems to have been in vain. Your novel is limited by your own creativity.

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Due to my previously bad experiences with Webnovel reviews, I was hesitant getting into this one where everyone was praising it, but wow, this novel deserves every bit of that praise. The worldbuilding is amazing, power system took a bit of reference from LOTM but still remains very original, and the plot hints at very interesting developments to come. Great job so far author and I hope you can keep it up till this becomes a big thing on Webnovel. Your work is too good to be less popular than some of the garbage on this app.

let me tell you, it was a good story building with numerous dangerous that make sense in our world, just the gender is reverse. The only thing I hated about this novel is that the moment he takes advantage of being such easy guy he hurt both his Family that is his mother and sister. Disregarding the kind of danger he is doing without even listening and making both of them cried. Honestly I felt hurt reading this, but other then that it have a very good story.

Nice bookI enjoyed every bit.I really think the chapter length should be increased.