Shameless Author here, with a shameless review.I wrote a novel recently, which isReincarnate as Prince:Change Magical World with Industry. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly.Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you!htt**://rb.gy/sxwmsa
go author you can do this ill wait for the next chapter even if it take months,just don't drop this ,there so much hypnosis genre here but so little are nice
The writing is good, but a little cliche as it follows the much-used ‘Chosen One’ trope. The story is also a little too fast-paced. Also, I find the mother a little naive (or at the maximum a little schizophrenic).
The story has much potential and I can see it going places. However, I know this story can be of better quality. The story telling could be better and more description would fit this story nicely. I hope you keep up the good work author!
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