Luna For The Rogue Alpha

Cheer up buddy, you're book is good. Just need more exposure and feature. Don't mind the rankings so much. History is a hard genre to write, but for you to write it like how you do is already good enough. -condiments

is just good                                                                                                                                                

this looks very promisng and i will like it if it focuses one the technology not the nationality. i looked forward to this. aldo why does this say it was updated 51 years ago even though the internet wasn’t even created at that time.

"no way bro, you can see the boss drops"'yeah man I can see them that one is the sword of time, that one is the chest piece of rangiku, and that one is someone's bathwat- uhh no its actually my drink for tonight'"how bro, when ever I kill them i just get a bunch of air.... This is soo unfair how dare the heavens forsake me like this"

It seems like webnovel completely abandon the novel's raw name and author's name in the app........................................................................

Very good comic, God bless the author too, very much appreciated already, I love this novel a lot and wish you would still keep up that momentum, continue your good work

Story starts off great, but...I came and saw the tags, such as #harem.I can say from the start when I started reading till chapter 17 that it should focus more on the MC because some readers just want to know on how the harem would usually start until it really becomes a 'harem'. This strange thought came to my mind that the male side characters were the harem of the MC, because the early chapters already started simultaneously detailing and focusing on the MC and the Side characters.Introduction of side characters came out quicker than what I thought, you could've just started slow with one. Other side characters at the start doesn't really give that much support in the start story of the MC.The story hooked me but stopped me from reading when the 2 male side characters started showing up, what is this? is this drama where a love triangle starts then goes to pentagon then octagon, so on...I just skimmed and scanned and was too lazy to actually read because wherever I stop and try to actually read, it starts in a place where the side character shows up.This gives vibes of Western and Eastern novel mixed together, that it makes me irritated when I think the about the negative points of both types of novel in one novel.I would like to continue reading, but giving this review, it's time for me to move on and go to other novels.-   Still rooting for improvement 😊  -

Love love love this book. I cant wait for more chapters. Guys you should really read this. Its has so many twist and turns but its really amazing so far.