this story focuses on way to many people. you start getting into one part then author leaves the person to focus on someone else. mc does not have any intelligence, the system is useless, mc father is a piece of trash, but everyone respects him and treats him the same. the author wants to tell 12 stories at the same time and it ruins the story. after chapter 67 the story doesnt focus on mc for 33 chapters then still jumps around. i tried only reading the chapters where i saw mc name at in the first couple paragraphs and it is mostly him getting beat up and slime coming to the rescue. my biggest issue is that the father gets too many chapters focusing on him. the shitty father gets more chapters than mc.
Chapter 20 so far looking forward to more. High level of depravity and harem stealing other people's women or taking other people's mothers, better than that only if future daughters enter the harem hehe great potential.
Overall a great writing quality and story. Even Cameron as a character and almost every character in this story so far has more layers than I’d expect from a typical little system novel. Very nice. Only thing could be better is updates. Cuz I need more chaps.
good story and good immortal cultivation but i just want to know is mc a hero or a villain cause i feel he's tilting to villain... pls let me know. thanks for the novel.
This is a guilty pleasure novel. Read at your own risk. Like i mentioned it had ntr and the revenge is based on an idea i Had, one day while... I want to develop the characters in some way and not solely focus on sx the entire novel
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