Love's Trials: A Journey of Forgiveness

a good story with an extremely nice and intelligent mc - book started with an interesting emotional and philosophical load, but the tournament part was disappointing without any logic, boring and useless - after good chapters , I was eager to read the revenge ... there came the tournament which was a cold water bath, added in nothing and made me lose the will to read . But it's a very good read, you can enjoy before the part of the tournament - in the tournament the story decays, it's more to fill, if you jump does not lose anything, if you read you will disappoint and even stop reading. If you like the book, skip that part, it's useless and you won't miss anything.

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Obligatory one star review, I saw that the translator came into the review section asking people to stop giving one star reviews, so I figured I'd come and be spiteful because most of my favorite novels have been dropped before being finished so why not, right? Maybe if I was busy reading my favorite novels, I wouldn't have time to be spiteful. But now that I have so much free time....

Not much character development or structure. I very rarely drop web novels that I start, but I can't force myself to continue this story. The MC lacks depth (which is easy to impart in a reincarnation genre), and all the character act like kids without common sense.

well compared to most trail novels this quite good but it doesn't deserve the hype readers are spreading just because it's from tlm's writer it's a copy of fantasy simulator so i would compare it with that only(compared general novels it's still quite good)it's subpar compared to fantasy simulator it's more of watered down version of fantasy simulator  as the Original work had many points which made more engaging which this lacks most importantly it was imeressive while astral apostle isn't as Astral apostle make it feel like mc is in VRrpg rather than a real world far away

Finished up to current MTL (~200 chapters). The author recommends a racist novel under some of his chapters (Global Reincarnation).The story improves as time goes on, still simple to follow, not much depth so far but potential is there, the fightning part is good, mixed with trending theme and ideas executed in a fresh way it's quite fine to read, more so if you ignore its obvious flaws. We're there just to have some fun.Characters are rather weak in logic and behavior, seem have the minds of teenagers, they don't have that natural, lifelike flow, independence, you can see they're limited by the author's writing skills. MC feels like a small kid telling obvious lies or bad excuses yet his "parents" - stronger, older people - believe him, they don't question, don't get suspicious, don't test him cleverly. King doesn't feel like a king, but a reincarnated teenager acting as a king. But it's still an improvement compared to that tasteless mob in TLM so I'll take it.Expected more from the author of TLM. Actually, if I didn't know it's him, I would think it's some newbie chinese author who's a little capable at writing. Should get more spicy and fat though, since the story hasn't really progressed that much in the first 200 chapters. But so far it is at it is.

The writing style is excellent, it's very clear.  It's development is very good.  I like the characters, I think that they are very interesting and am excited to see where the story goes.

Yuri but no gender bender? All in.