Love’s Misstep

  • Genre: Urban
  • Author: Younglovebird
  • Status: Ongoing

Rating(3.5 / 5.0, 14 votes)
5 stars
2(14%)
4 stars
7(50%)
3 stars
1(7%)
2 stars
4(29%)
1 stars
0(0%)

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  1. kHalz
    kHalz rated it
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    first  let me tell you that this review contains spoiler  !is it worth your money ? ( coins )It depends .  If you enjoy stories without harem / romance /  then go ahead .  It's a  gold .If you want a harem tag tagging along then it's a disappointment  harem - no there isn't .I'm the type of guy who doesn't read novels if  it doesn't have harem tag ..  no harem ?  drop ! . but the author doesn't come clean about if it contains harem  and to find out your self .  Remember he doesn't say that it doesn't contains harem  and to find out your self .. which is a bait to capture more  readers  .Personal review -      1 -200 chapters    all the mc does is train ,eat , sleep , have a  mental breakdown ,  and the cycle repeats itself .  I thought of dropping couple of times but went forward anyway .     It's quite irritating at this rate .after chapter 300 it's quite readable and story continues to get interesting . And it made me forgot all the frustration I had previously .I dropped at 402 chapter after the protagonist wants to share about orgin of him and his teacher ( they are from earth )   and about the god to others .    It destroyed the full meaning of the story for me and I don't like when the protagonist goes around telling others about his secret / Trump card / system / god /  reincarnation  etc  .. what's the point ?  it's the only thing that makes mc unique  and,  I think people who argue about it are people pleasers .   whatever  is the case  I don't care anymore  . . natural review-   extremely well detailed story , slow   I mean extremely slow story till 300 chapter and later story takes off .Interesting world background .Good updating stability .well though story and characters development .if you can handle till 300 chapters  . .. you won't be disappointed .
  1. AsDarkAsBlack
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    I liked the first 40 chapters. It was pretty chill like a slice of life story. I hope we get the rest of the chapters
  1. Yamatosan15
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    First of all, the translator is doing an amazing job with this novel, even as the author twiddles his thumbs and churns out filler after filler. The updates are consistent, but even the rapid releases aren't able to distract you from this story's failures. Let's descend in order of ratings. The character design is well done- for the main character, that is. It's really endearing to see him grow and steadily exercise more power, considering his *****, pitiful origins. However, his arrogance- or perhaps chuunibyo- is used to awe and inspire those around him, but it most frequently turns into a joke, a poor attempt at comedic relief. Speaking of chuunibyo, there's a heavy Japanese influence in this novel. There's nothing wrong with that, but directly plagiarizing characters from other anime, such as Saber, One-Punch Man and Hellscythe is a sad substitution for actual character development, and really demonstrates the author's lack of originality, which is further exacerbated by his terrible pacing, the overarching flaw that neuters this story's potential for growth.I mentioned that I would descend in order of ratings, but I merely gave character design 2 stars. Why is that? That's because the story doesn't consist of only the main character. The main character has a few potential love interests, and anyone caught up on translated releases will be very familiar with them.Unfortunately, the fatal flaw strikes again. I ask you, readers, after the tower arc, how many of you are still conscious of the supporting characters that were introduced in the first "half" of the novel? Perhaps if you binge read, you might have some semblance of their personalities, but the tower arc, as a means of isolating the elites from the rest of the world, has utterly disconnected the reader from the rest of the world. We're not talking a quick arc either- we're speaking about hundreds of chapters, with maybe 50% of it filler and the author simply bloviating about whatever he wants to extend the word count.Is it strange to consider character interactions as part of the character design category? Honestly, the interactions are consistent, but of course they would be- the author has simply stole premade characters and dropped them into his story. The characters he designed himself are your typical wuxia cultivators. He hasn't just stolen characters either. There's an implicit ridiculousness to this story- if you really think about it, you might become dizzy. For example, don't let it bother you that the main character wields Shu's ability from Guilty Crown, as well as something akin to the eyes of death from Tsukihime, as well as Excalibur from Fate, with another recent addition being the Hulk's physical power up. That our mutated chimera of a character is driven by a ***** personality of straightforward foolhardiness of nigh idiocy is no comfort- his transfer to this world might have neglected parts of his brain.There's not much to say about development- there is practically none after he enters the tower, and what was established before will quickly be forgotten. The author provides random tidbits of history to pad his word count, but instead of explaining the rest of the world besides China, he'll focus on something inconsequential to churn out another filler. Oh? Did I not mention the origin of the title? Don't worry, you won't see much of the "absolute choice" system anyway- it simply acted as a method to introduce comedic relief, but its output was cringe and a prelude to the author's questionable state of mind- honestly, we should've recognized his insensitivity before reading this far.The author alludes to the fact that he recognizes his pacing is messed up, personifying himself into his characters and speaking dialogue that's essentially throwing shade at our "impatience". He has deluded both the readers and himself into believing that his chapters of full of substance and vibrant with content, a false sentiment borne of his arrogance. If you read the comments, you'll get the information you need in 1-3 sentences, as opposed to the author's long winded rambling. Don't have any high hopes for this story- the 4 and 5 star ratings are from an era long past. How can a story reform when the author won't? It is pure idiocy to expect anything from this fool. For the brothers stuck in a limbo of anticipation and then deflation upon seeing a chapter of nonsense, I feel you, and I beseech the newer readers, on the fence- don't read this story.
  1. GODOFEND
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    Hi!I am the author of this novel. Firstly, I really want to scream because I am so excited to finally released this novel! Yeay! *Hand Clapping for myself*.My name is Sabet, I am a female author who loves to play online game (too much). So that will be the main reason why I want to write a Game Novel, and boom! here we got LAST SHELTER ONLINE.My nationality is Indonesia, but currently I am active as a college student in number one Engineering Campus in Thailand. Yes, I got scholarship! But sadly, I can not graduate on time due to COVID-19 pandemic. And the bad news is, my scholarship will be run out soon. So I need to work hard to pay my study and my life in abroad (I can feel the MC here). I wish that my novel can be loved and enjoyed by everyone, I wish that I can win this biggest competition of WSA 2022. In order to do that, your support is very important to me.Best Wishes, Sabet_Saga.
  1. YuwiiTQt
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    awesome story, perfectly written.I loved it, I honestly love the research done to create the story and how the author research and start the chapter using an awesome quote.I loved the story, keep it up, and good luck!
  1. GTHarris08TZW
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    I am hocked to this story and I can't wait for the next chapter. I am dying with curiosity of what will happen next. Hearts and more hearts, this is just too good❤❤💗❤💗❤💗❤💗💗❤💗💗💗❤❤💗💗💗💗💗
  1. Night_Walker001
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    Hey guys!! A typical shameless author’s review is here. First of all, I’d like to say thanks to anyone who is reading this novel and supporting me. You know, every view, review, collection, and power stone mean so much to me. They give me motivations to continue writing this story.Alright, that’s enough for the formality.Let’s talk about the storyline. The story is mainly about an MC going back in time to fix the past and create a new/different future for him and human race. But as the story progresses, the MC will realize and discover that there is much more to the supposed simple backstory of his regression. As for what it is or what they are, you have to read it yourself.Now, for the story’s pace. For the reason of I want to lay as solid foundation as possible to the story, it might cause the pace of the story to be moderate at most at the beginning. Especially, the first 15 chapters of which being focused on some basic knowledge about magic, Ortus, tutorial, his future organization, his friends, and many more. That’s why, when the story progresses to tutorial ark or Ortus ark, you would not get confused with the info dump.Last but not least, the plots of the story. I can only tell you that, I’ve already planned the main concept and some big events to half of the volume 3. It is just a plan though, it might get changed into another one if I find something better or new inspiration.P.S: English is not my first language, so, please bear with me :D
  1. OverlordOfDeath
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