THIS IS VERY READABLE IN MTL. This is basically a mishmash of pokemon and soul land. Dont expect a character development because our mc here is a heavenly immortal in his last life.
An amazing story. The author has nicely displayed the world of VR in this story. Fight scenes are nicely portrayed. While the concept seems similar to other stories, the skills to write a good story must be noted. The development is well paced and I look forward to the updates. Nice work
I have no words to say to this but incredible! The story is stable and the flow is entirely good. The image in my mind is crystal clear and it looked as if the characters were alive. The dialogues and their personality, ugh, I really like this.The author is reaaallly great. Will wait for more! ๐๐๐
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Redoing the review as of chapter 13!For some reason of didnt update the chapter I have ready.Anyhow: Well written and detailled story! Has some infodumps but the info does matter, so I'm kind of Oke with it for now. I want some romance *since it is tagged*. I really love the interaction so far! There are quite a bit of monologues though..Its better written than alot that I've seen! Looking forward to the rest
i have never actually tried to review a novel properly but i will try...This novel is better for slow readers, and those that love gradual progressing plots and reasonable developments, it has a great amount of mystery to it along with a thrilling feeling while reading it, the few fight scenes it has had so far are wonderfully written any you can really imagine it.Relations ships are stable and not erratic, when a relationship is made they are set in stone until otherwise made to change unlike some authors that have the relationships of people changing day in and day out.i would say this novel is one where you have to think on what might happen next as the while the progressing may seem almost random it is great... and i am repeating thing right now... anyway what i was saying is that if you want to guess what is going to happen next you need to pay attention to little details. The entire novel so far flows from one situation to another seamlessly and beautifully.Since, it was so good i will just leave the total score at 5 stars, and ignore the stability....
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