Translator does good work. Praise him. The Work is **** though. While I understand a story has to have a start to grow from way too many people have pits in heads to force clichéd agravating 'plot' threads.The Mc doesn't think like a human. He's egoistic to a self sabotaging insane extreme only to suddenly randomly give a damn. At dumb point. He can't seem to understand on a basic level the ideas of reputation or standardized credentials despite having trained as a doctor and so repeatedly fucks up trying to get hired. Only for the poor people looking for a doctor to faf about in guilt for rejecting him when he looked exactly like a quack and scammed and couldn't answer relevant medical questions. Then the narrative expects us to laugh at them. So agravating. He essentially wasted strategic resources that might have save his family.
I would like to start off by saying that I have no clue as to what Giant plot holes these people are talking about. At this point I have read over 250+ chapters of this LN. It is a fun and well written LN. The side adventures don't seem like side adventures and feel more like they are a part of the whole story and progress the story forwards. All and all it is a great Original work!
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Synopsis and title is good to start with. Story development and character design were upto the mark.. I just want to give a piece of advice as well, just try to separate dialogues from the narrative paragraphs and do work on your grammar a bit. Do your best to stay in past tense. Overall, It was such a good read! I am rooting for you, Author. Do wonders!
Xia Qingyue every night was with a bit more cravings, she did not know when she had begun to pay more attention to the rhythmic steps that could be heard far away during the night than to the pain that the cold transmitted to her body.
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