"This book had me laughing out loud and tearing up at the same time. The banter between Ethan and his secretary, John, was hilarious, and the romance with Emily was beautifully written. Can’t wait to read more from this author!"
This review follows Webnovel's provided rating criteria, and each category will be given a short explanation.Firstly, writing quality is three stars. In the initial chapters, there are glaring spacing errors that took me right out of my reading flow. This issue seems to be largely gone by chapter 6, but I'd recommend polishing those initial chapters. Remember, first impressions matter!Next, story development is five stars. The pacing is great, and it makes me want to read more.Character design is. . . One star. The characters have names, but I can't recall any basic features aside from clothes.Lastly, world background is five stars. It's a unique setting that I'd say is extremely memorable.
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great novel right here... mc is an arrogant beach but has the balls to make up for it... also i thought of reducing the rating cause u changed the stickman cover but it's unfair to a good novel...
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