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This is an interesting read as a Jojo fan, but I have some things I'd like to point out.The author doesn't seem to understand the powers of of a few Stands at all! 1st) Author seems to think Crazy Diamond is limited to only fixing inanimate objects when Crazy Diamond fixes EVERYTHING other than its owner + it can't bring the dead back to life. Other than that, Crazy Diamond is an absolutely broken OP Stand. Author wasted so many The World Over Heaven's Reality Overwrite ability to heal others when he could have just used Crazy Diamond to heal them, and save the Reality Overwrite abilities of The World Over Heaven on himself.2nd) God Anubis is a Stand that possessed a sword. It has the ability to PHASE through inanimate objects to strike at the target. Which means blocking or hiding behind something is useless against Anubis. Author had many weapon clashes against many enemies using Anubis when he could in fact one shot someone by phasing Anubis through their weapons and killing them.3rd) Emperor is a Stand by itself. It DOESN'T need to possess a gun or a medium to be used. The gun itself is the Stand! Along with its bullets! The Stand that needs a medium to be used is Sex Pistols used by Mista in Vento Aureo, and it works by having the little Stands alter the bullet's trajectory by bouncing it around. Technically speaking, if he used Crazy Diamond, he could keep restoring the same bullet over and over without the need to reload or to purchase new bullets, making it a super OP combination. If he combined Killer Queen's ability and turn the bullet into bombs, it will be even more terrifying.

After reading tens of books, I'm now in a reading slump. According to Google, in order to get out of it, you need to get back to reading your favorite. So here I am, Lord of the Mysteries! Please get rid of my corruption! Praise the Fool!

It is the nth time I read this novel. I very much like the characters, cowardly tsundere ML x naughty straightforward MC with other characters to help their journey. There is no drama that got hold too long because these kind of characters. The ending is also good, every character deserves their ending.

Unfortunately, I don't really like the translation. It's kind of jumbled (please forgive my English)? It's like, before it is in third person's view and the next it becomes the first person's view. It also has mistakes such as naming and writing. I hope someone will edit it to make it more fun to read (I always had to guess what it means).

Can you send it in parts?