Life of the Strongest Transmigrator

This story is kind of similar the one i read into other apps called SAGO the name story is THE GOD OF WAR BACK FROM THE DEAD. anyways I'm gonna keep reading this one, i love this kind of story though..

This is wish fulfillment type of story with your typical Beta anime MC with woman here and there. So don't expect a challenge or character development, so read this in your leisure time but of course don't read it if you're reading novel with serious heart

A unique and good novel. Good plot twist...weak to Strong Mc...chapters are detailed and no Grammatical mistakes...Detailed background...stable chapter update...overall a very good novel to read

Great settting and world bulding but terrible main character. He constantly offends everybody and additionaly molest women without thinking of consequences, yet somehow author claims that he is cautious and has extremely high IQ and EQ. Incostitency of his character made me really angry. I wouldn't mind some kind of evil, lustful villain who doesn't care about women and so on. But metanarration put him on the postion of good guy, author even use righteous to describe him sevral times. It's f*ckin ridiculous. People like that, who claim to be good and care for women but cheat on those whom they supposedly care and molest innocent girls aren't villains, they are pieces of sh*t. The worst thing about this book are the parts where author have audacity to shill main character perverted (12 y/o level perversion) and obnoxious or plainy stupid actions as rational and planned. Without plot armor thick as Mt. Tai, he would be dead hundreds of times and its quite literal statment. Weak people who offend all powerhouses in the world don't deserve long lifespan. After 400 hundred chapters is fair to compare it to hipothetical situation where Slovakia dare to offend and con Russia, USA, China, Japan and UK. And sleep with their daughers. But for some reason everyone loves Slovakia, because Slovakia is a genius with high IQ and EQ. Ridiculous.

SO FUCKING BORING TO READ AND ANNOYING!!  I THOUGHT MC IS FUCKING OP BECAUSE IT SAYS IN THE FUCKING SYNOPSIS. BUT I DIDNT EXPECT HE IS FUCKING WEAK!!  HE IS IMMORTAL??  IMMORTAL YOUR DICK!!!    YOU SHOULD CHANGE THE TITLE OF THE NOVEL TOO!!  IDIOTIC, MORONIC, WEAK MC KILLING PROTAGINISTS.. AS IF!!!!!

I just finished reading your first chapter. I must say you put a lot of work in it and it's creative. However, it's a lot of exposition in the first Chapter.All the backstory, worldbuilding... You know. Every Information that's not conveyed by Dialogue or Action.The other scenes beside the Exposition are good though.Keep as much Information as possible hidden from the audienceThey are smart, and will figure it outYou have a great Set up. Try to show a little bit of scene of mc getting bashed up in his date or something. I'm not a date expert. So, I can't tell you this in detail. Only can give an idea of what should be written first. If you show such scenes where mc feel very low and sad, although he put a lot of effort in this date, it would give a proper way to convey emotions of the mc in a dialogue or actions.Also, show only what is necessary for the character to know, not for the audience. Like the god of creation and God of void info.It's too much for me to process this much info right at the beginning and I'm sure it is same for other readersAdditionally, it makes it reasonable to tell our mc and the the audience patiently, the Info that's very basic for anyone to know.It is currently all internal, I think that's hard to convey without any external reflection. Like, talking with someone else about it, or showing the emotional change through action can get a better effect.If you just tell what happened, it also takes a little bit away from the Reader finding out about it. You know...Now, I am not an expert though...I've seen many novels doing the same thing at first. some get popular while some doesn't. It depends.So, it's up to you whether you feel right to change the arrangement of plot a bit and add some emotional scenes in it to make it more lively and natural. That's all I have to say. I'll leave a review on webnovel if you like. However, I need your permission If I can put this up or not. thinkingAnyway, good work. You did a great job! Keep it up!

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