Leywin: The whole new magic concept

wow! the title caught my attention and I must say that the book was worth my time!!

Too much nationalism in a novel. Won't Recommend reading this novel as it just feels like a copy from good apocalyptic novels. The author is also very stupid as how he writes the MC to act smart. If you are a reader who likes books I highly reccomend also rating 1star for this book so the author will know what he did wrong.

Despite all the hype,  this story fail and dissapointing... Making a football novel really hard it seems.  First,  too many characters,  if this anime we can remember their faces but too many names in just few chapters.. Well football a.k.a soccer is team sport so everyone play a role.. Lastly........

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good novel... starting few chapters feel slow but bear with it until he auction chapter ...plot will pickup from there...side characters are well fleshed out and the adults don't just starts believing in the mc cause he's the MC . MC worked hard to get their support . world building is a little bit slow but done through subtle dialogues instead of whole bunch of text.overall well thought out slice of life novel where MC is trying to earn money, become strong enough to protect his money, and his group and subtly trying to change the world.

Finally, a well written book of my day of reading. Not only that, story is fantastic. Writing quality is perfect. Characters are relatable.

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The writing, grammar wise, is fairly terrible. It’s all in passive voice, so everything sounds funny. It makes it less enjoyable to read. Honestly it seems to be on purpose to make the word coung longer. Even if English isn’t your first language, you have to actively try to sound like Yoda all the time. I think the wrong tense choice is also because of everything being in passive voice. Grammar aside, the story is wonderful thus far. Interesting magic system and world development. It’s not one size fits all, you have X tiers of power with X subtiers. It seems different enough to stick out, but not unnecessarily complicated just to be different.