Level Up, My Love!

Great story but needs updates

That's a great job... I am just loving the story ❤️❤️

The novel is really interesting and fun. The history is accurate but has a different ending chosen by the author. Personally I'm not a big fan of historic novels but this one is a really good one and I would definitely recommend it.

Copy and paste of the other system store owner novels, except worse.First off, the writing quality is abysmal. It's to the point where it's hardly legible. Theres a couple different qualities of MTL's, and this is arguably one of the worst. The writing quality outright ruins the novel to begin with.The story development, character design, and world background are extremely poor. I can't say much about the world background since I didn't read that far, but based on how much this is copying from other novels, I can only give it two stars. Characters? Same as other system store novels. First customer is a young master who incidentally buys seemingly overpriced goods and is amazed about how good they are, thus leading to new customers. Story development? Well, I'm just going to skip over that, just a blatant copy.Overall, this novel is pretty substandard, even for this site.

Who would have thought we would see the day Webnovel translate a novel without permision and even used a different novels title and synapsis and even changed the terms. Remember all those good novels that were translated by different websites but had to stop due to Qidian wsueing anyone translating novels that Qidian had publishing rights too.Dont get me wrong this story is good. And the story from the title and synapses was decent aswell.

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From the little I've read this seems like it will be an amazing book. I will review after I'm further along to let you know if I still think that is the case.