Let Us Reach

Beautiful writing with so much depth it really brought the characters to life and I was very much immersed in the world created by those author. Kudos to you on a job well done! Keep on writing!

the story is so deranged that i can't tell if the author is being serious or joking when writing the chapters. it's so funny lmao. seraphine is an interesting character and i liked how you added depth to the other characters. i'm aching to read more!

try to add more details of expressions and environment

"What's this? A feet on the toilet?"

Judging by the hole in the satellite picture

Linked Celestial entities: Moon; Sun (3%)

******

"Wha–?" Ivan's face lit up. His previous nervousness was totally unfounded. Without any hesitation, Ivan kissed her on the lips. Hermione was stunned just for a moment before reciprocating his action by kissing him back. Their lips parted as a trail of saliva still stretched between their mouths. They kissed again. Their tongue explored each other's mouth battling for dominance. He ran one hand through her hair, further dishevelling it while his other hand slowly reached down to her chest, slowly exploring the area. The fabric of her thin top rubbed against her erect nipples as she moaned. He then gave them a soft twist as a slightly audible muffled moan escaped from her mouth. She was so lost in pleasure that she didn't mind his hands exploring her body. He then gently cupped and squeezed her small breast. Hermione couldn't control herself anymore as she also started exploring his body. Her left hand slowly reached down to his groin area. It stopped above the huge bulge caused by his hard penis. The thin fabric of the pyjama didn't help much to hide it. She traced the outline of his penis with her willowy fingers as Ivan groaned. She then wrapped her fingers around the penis with the thin fabric of the pyjama around it and started stroking gently.