I see a writeup with bright future here. you are doing well , the story development is okay, it captivated me at first sight, but the only downside to your work is the lack of a stable update. you should try and improve in your updates. howbeit, this is a great work.i'm looking forward to seeing the writer and his novel improve.
Mannn! I thought this was gonna be some typical Naruto transmigration story, but man, it's a long way from it. The book is actually really dark and cold, which definitely caught me off guard. I am still barely into the chapters, but I really love how the author molded the lead personality around the "survival of the fittest" mindset and completely changed his character.I look forward to seeing other characters, like Alex, Campbell, and others-what roles or powers they've inherited. Definitely planning to keep reading!
Hey guys, after much thought, I felt it was best to reboot this novel as it would make the flow of the story better. I'll keep this version for comparison until the rebooted version catches up with this timeline.
Opening the previously installed app, he starts his practice and plays around to gain a deeper understanding. As he was too interested in this, he hasn't opened any folder of other subjects yet. However, that's not a problem as long as he can pass all the test before the deadline which is next week.
"Wha–?" Ivan's face lit up. His previous nervousness was totally unfounded. Without any hesitation, Ivan kissed her on the lips. Hermione was stunned just for a moment before reciprocating his action by kissing him back. Their lips parted as a trail of saliva still stretched between their mouths. They kissed again. Their tongue explored each other's mouth battling for dominance. He ran one hand through her hair, further dishevelling it while his other hand slowly reached down to her chest, slowly exploring the area. The fabric of her thin top rubbed against her erect nipples as she moaned. He then gave them a soft twist as a slightly audible muffled moan escaped from her mouth. She was so lost in pleasure that she didn't mind his hands exploring her body. He then gently cupped and squeezed her small breast. Hermione couldn't control herself anymore as she also started exploring his body. Her left hand slowly reached down to his groin area. It stopped above the huge bulge caused by his hard penis. The thin fabric of the pyjama didn't help much to hide it. She traced the outline of his penis with her willowy fingers as Ivan groaned. She then wrapped her fingers around the penis with the thin fabric of the pyjama around it and started stroking gently.
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