Wow I just started reading this today & its really good. I am surprised how Jun Min & Jun Hua are so likeable as 2 different characters as one person. The story is fast paced. It's well written with some grammar issues but not bad enough to distract from the story. Sometimes the author gives us a bit of confusion with mysterious conversations but it gets cleared up later on. However why does the author keep mentioning that the MC is really beautiful even when she wear a veil. The public hasn't seen her face without the veil but they all assumed she is beautiful. Also I am assuming the ML is Shouji who has sharp eyes and can tell a guy dressing as a girl but not the reverse ? Hmmm.....what with that problem? Still it's a great story can't wait for some romance to happen.
WTF is going on with the translator? Sorry, but if you have internal problems, at least *COMMUNICATE* with the readers instead of f***ing us all over like this. The novel is almost unreadable in the later story with so many chapter skips.
Very good book, writting is excellent. This book is very good at kingdom-building. It didn't feel that good at first, it felt like some cultivation world setting at first,but after 15 or so chapters it gets very interesting. I couldn't stop reading. every chapter is consistent. And, there is little info dump- saying that the data is integrated into plot is the no ways incorrect.
I've read only 4-5 chapters yet So don't know where the story is goingI liked it but dear author what's with the pointless and needless use of Japanese words/verbs the totally make the story feel out of place With a mediaeval western world building use of Japanese words makes me feel awkward while reading especially the use of word seishin or whatever which is important part of the world's power system As a non-japanese reader who completely doesn't understand the words' meaning it makes me turn my back on the storyI really hope you can change the use of Japanese words with more familiar English words or atleast translate those words into English
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