Legend of Aurum

Aurumn  has been stagnant since the author went on holiday. Pray tell when we would be seeing more on this wonderful story?! The storyline is rather quite unforgettable. Please return already!

Author buddy i think you should stop writing this novel too and try improving your writng skills and logic even more.the charecters of the people are too shallow, almost one dimensional.and if there are immortals in that world this idiot selling things like cleansing elixir as a weakling will only result in those immortals kidnapping him,torturing him,getting info from him,then finally dissecting his brain to look for abnormalities.and your world background is terrible.i hope you can atleast reach the minimum standards of a proper author by the time of your next novel if you dont give up by then.Goodluck.

The most important point for now, in my opinion, is the quality of writing. There are many mistakes in the sentences, for example words that are missing ... It is difficult to understand the story in these conditions and it could discourage many. I therefore recommend reviewing your sentences before publishing the chapters.

Author shows an improvement as he progresses through the chapters.

Something on my mind would be in the latest chapter, the partnership that forms between N and A. It reminds me a little of two thieves plotting a grand heist before it all happens. The image of partnership comes across clearly but there seems to be something off about it. All the best, yeah!

Looks good so far, like me you have the same mistakes, going bit to fast and some grammatical mistakes which will be fixed in the future i guess. Cool plot though, I've added it to my library, wish you'd continue it.

Having read this makes me interested with the genre. Needs a bit of work with grammar and punctuation. The plot is interesting as speculations can be formulated from the context.

11 chapters in 5 days! That's pretty good update rate. The story development and pacing is good. The world background is interesting. MC transmigrating into another world with advanced tech/knowledge has me anticipating! Great work!