Maybe an hour or two passed like this or a couple of seconds, i could not be sure. But finally someone touched be on my back and thats when everything went black.
On his home world, he'd free-climbed rock mesas. This proved a lesser challenge since he was already halfway there. Soon, he managed to wedged himself in a window frame, precariously balanced on a narrow ledge. Frequent rains had kept the outside of the window clean and there was little dust buildup inside. Zhane saw a dozen zombies trapped on the second floor. There was an elevator inside, but the creatures could no longer understand how to use it.
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
this story captivates with its incredible use of description, making every scene and character come alive, the author’s attention to detail immerses you fully, I eagerly await for the next chapter
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