Leah De Estia & Ishakan

Quite the smooth read that engages the reader. I am expectant for the next chapters. Noice. Keep at it, hon. I will hunt you if you ruin it~ ^^

Nice.                                                                                                                                        And good

he broke out of the egg he broke out of his egg but there was no mom or dad

I am waiting  for a jeepney in front of the billard hall.

Well, anyways, I'm really sorry guys but looks like the vast world of Gaia was too much for a simple 14 year old to keep up with.

A squeal from Mei interrupted my thoughts as she regretted biting into a lumpy, dark brown substance that bore the texture of hardened bread.  

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King Skyler and Queen Heart was very disappointed in life.  So they became mad and more fearless,  they faced Argus. Rafaela's sorrow doubled.  

He looked at the wrecked store and knew they couldn't stay here any longer. He sighed and brought Su Lin out of the store with him, looking for another place to reside at temporarily. He killed a few zombies along the way, but found that they didn't have any crystals in their heads like the giant zombie, which upset him.

Ana scoffed with surprise and watched him. "Well you're one to talk, calling me ratchet. I'm more well-mannered than you are."

I like. You Lee Jen Yin... Chen... May boyfriend. Na ako... Huh? Sorry ah.....

It still a good novel.. keep up the good work.