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Constructive criticism, hope you don't take it badly. First though - I like your novel. It has enough difference from other novels of the same type, yet keeps lots of the things you would love from those novels. Fast paced, timely updates. I enjoy reading it. However, you write your story like it's a draft of the actual novel. Similar to how an author would prepare the points and events you want in a chapter before writing the actual thing. I'm not saying to write "filler" and "fluff" material just to flesh-out the chapter. I'm glad this novel does NOT do that, but you need to develop situations and events more. Practice that, then do it on this novel, and I think you'll grow as an author, and have a great novel on your hands. Lastly - I'm going to vote for your novel. I think it has massive potential

i don't know what to say this story is fuc"ing amazing keep it wish you all the best kkkkkkkkkkkeeeeeeeeeeeepppppppppp iiiiiiiiiiiiiittttttttttttttt uuuuuuuuuuupppppppppp

This novel is still still incredibly overrated due to 1) someone spamming 5 star reviews over and over, and 2) the novel itself is written very poorly. Sentences are stilted, with no real descriptions. It's like I'm reading a play giving bare bones directions, not a book. These characters don't feel real.

It's one of the best story I've ever read I had to read it twice maybe three times cuz the author won't match release the chapters even though I gave them power stones now I'm going to have to read it again while for chapters

If one can spam fake 5 stars reviews,
Does it mean is ok tk spam one stars as well?


Im am taking that logic as a yes....
Shameless author just how many accts you have?
Of course excluding the fresh bloods

Awesome, but little slow
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