Excellent writing structures and usage of grammar. Everything is very detailed, which is to my liking. Apart from stability of chapters published, everything is great. Keep up the good work!
"Didn't go radical this time around, did you?" The unique brunette beauty took a sit beside her. Elena didn't care to give the main lead her attention. She was the main star of this story, she didn't have to waste her time giving her any attention when if she had died, the woman would have had it all.
[Ding! Transfer has been successful. Host has entered the Ancestral Jade Garden Realm. Will now assimilate with host's memories for self-improvement]....
"Oh come on!" He whined and finally, the girls broke the hug and stood up. Nick tackled them both in a bear hug together. "Congratulations little sis!" He hollered.
I thought that, after my blood legacy, nothing surprises me anymore, from the bottom of my heart congratulations COHARC, I got goosebumps reading this novel. I, a novel addict, honestly think you should invest more in it for a possible book publication or the creation of a film.
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