Is this suppose to be like Black Tech Internet Cafe System? Sound almost the same, reborn in a new world inside a local person body, start a store or business and release VR games.
I suppose that America in this world will not be discovered for a long time because Constantinople is still in the hands of the Byzantines who even if not Catholic have relatively cordial relations with the European countries. So it would be a good idea to send exploration and colonization ships to the new world and the Atlantic islands to make America and maybe even Oceania and South Africa (very sparsely populated at that time) the chasse gardé of Germany and at least give Germany a considerable advantage before the other European countries understand anything.
Please make more its great I replay want to red more of this so please continue the good work I replay thought that having the mc be pain was awesome you did very well
Needs a lot of work before it can be called good. The sentences are barely readable, there's too much shifting between POVs and the pronouns character go by is never consistent. As for everything else, they're decent at best. The pacing is all over the place, the characters feel two dimensional and the romance is way too rushed.
Overall its great but your character's lines are too long. Everything else is great. Like conversations are way too long and simetimes you don't even know who's talking.
I love the story...it's interesting and this is my first time reading this kind of novel about omegaverse. the main characters has really undertanding and amazing family....for the author....update more often pleasee
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