Starting is good. The character development in this also great.. Waiting to look how the other characters are getting developed and how the family sentiments are handled in this.
Awesome character-building! It is quite a while since I saw a novel with an internally conflicted MC. I'm going to save this since I sympathize with the MC!
The story is very good and it fills the Void the LoTPE has filled in my soul, however it is riddled with grammar errors and I sometimes have to re-read sentences to figure out what you are trying to tell me.Overall it is a good read though- Would be better if you fixed the grammar, or spent 10 more minutes on each chapter just to read it yourself and find errors that way,
good writing and a loveable and strong FL. I love reading FLs thoughts as you can see that she is not just a pushover and will bite back if you let her. I'm excited to see where this story will go and I know the author will have some juicy drama planned for this story. the characters are dynamic and quirky and it's fun to read and learn about them!
The one and only Patriarch Onion. I have been a fan of yours since I was in high school about four years ago. I haven't read this version here, but I read both versions of this book over on Wattpad and all the other books you've written. And my personal favorite was definitely this one. If this is same as the ones over on Wattpad then it's definitely a book worth reading. One thing that stood out to me the most that I liked was the in-depth explanation of the techniques. And the background of the mc before rebirth is just Chief's kiss, great premise that was explained beautifully. But..*Sigh* I used to be really hooked on your books before, but sadly it's been a while since I've read any since I stopped using Wattpad. But asides from praising this amazing book, I wanted to say you were one of my biggest inspirations to start writing Patriarch Onion. All those times I spent hiding my phone in class to read your books are memories that I'll never forget. Thank you for writing your novels, seriously they hold a special place in my heart.If you ever have the time I hope you'd take a look at one of my books, it's called "The Founder Of Qi, Cultivation."Sincerely, your super, grandiose, mega large, biggest fan, Tseth(The Sage Equal To Heaven hehe)😊
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