This is a well-written novel. I cannot wait for the next chapter. The author has outdone him/herself. The amount of detail this novel focuses on is just amazing. I did have my doubts but as the story progressed, all dissipated and I started to truly read the novel. I am loving this.
It’s hard to put into words how much I enjoy this story. wang wei as a main character is phenomenal him understanding himself while acknowledging his faults as a person to grow is done so well. he’s op yet not to the point where there is no one to challenge him from getting stomped by di tian or the fella born from two great emperors in the most recent chapters whos as of now more powerful than him while being in the same generation gives his strength more depth along with the fact that he has to go through hundreds to thousands of years of cultivation despite his overwhelming talent compared to some mcs who in their own verse are 20 year olds fighting old monsters millions of years old like no big deal. His confidence in himself is somthing I also enjoy.The world building is the thing I enjoy the most by far. The way you crafted the universe to allow uncountable numbers of power systems each to their own heavenwill world is marvelous. The lore of the myriad emperor world is also somthing I love. When they talk about the past eras and the truth of how they played out its makes me want to know more. The way you’ve combined basically every eastern fantasy cultivation system into this story without it seeming forced but the natural order of things is great. If there’s anything lacking about them is that there seems to be a lack of soul cultivators considering it’s one of the three principles that make up cultivation systems it seems strange we haven’t encountered any or a sect that focuses on the souls and ways to attack and utilize it to a extreme. The romance and side characters are a strong suit. everyone in this great generation competing to become the next eternal emperor they all have their own motives and goals there own dreams and families counting on them to live up to their expectations. It’s funny seeing how you characterize someone like Lin Fan being a classic cultivation main character coming from a lower world with great talent and a harem. wang weis relationship with wu Hong is also something I enjoy her mystery and his insecurities in the relationship while still loving her and having to deal with them. Li Jun is also the goat fr. Now after praising the story to the high heavens to mention the only glaring fault I have with the story. The grammar, while by no means bad or unreadable there are moments where it has broke me out of my immersion because I have to check if I read somthing wrong only to find the wrong word. This isn’t something common and has only happened to me a couple times in the story and in the last 50 chapters hasn’t happened at all or at least that I’ve noticed. Overall 10/10 cant wait for the next chapters.
The story is good and well developed, I like the design of the world, the story line and all but what I don't like and let me be honest, is the character designs. I mean, the characters are okay and all but I don't like how the woman flick all over him, he goes around and each woman just throw themselves into his arms, just like he goes picking flower into a garden, it's really really frustrating, he doesn't even know how to reject those women who make him feel irritated, annoyed and all, I have read countless similar novels and really is making me feel irritated with reading more, but the only thing that keeps me in continue reading it is because the story developments is quite good. author if I have to say something it would be, if you wanted to write a sexual story it's okay but why do you have to write just about harems in novels as good as this, at least make the protagonist able to reject every woman' approach.I would say if I were Lin Xuan, I would immediately reject every woman because every woman just stick to him because he is powerful, because of his resources or because thinking that sticking to him they could obtain new opportunities, thinking that their love for Lin Xuan is without interest on his resources or in his opportunities, thinking that they are with him because of his good personality, his kindness for saving them, but not knowing that what they really covet is the opportunities he brings with him. Lin Xuan sure knows but still keeps an eyes blind and let them come to him. If I were him I would rather throw that bunch of covetous woman, I would better continue training and what is more I would break the engagement with Xuan Xinran (or so was the name) at the moment I could talk or turn adult, giving my opinion of her shameless behavior in breaking an engagement that was already set just for him what is worse is she was so shamelessly breaking it because of a baby, she seems like a pedophile.
Your details are impeccable and your story line is great. You have a true talent for writing ; I look forward to reading more of your novels. I have thoroughly enjoyed your book. ❤️❤️❤️
I have been voting for this novel ever since its beginning. One of the best works I have ever read in my life. The first act seems bland without much human interaction but it's the making of the vampire and the introduction of the main characters. The second arc blossoms onto a lovely fit of teenage romance, the revelation of characters with cool and mysterious backgrounds, their dreams, the instructor's mysteriousness, and everything that sets this novel apart from the hundreds of thousands of others.I know this novel gonna become popular as long as the platform actively supports the author!Know this, I was here before it bec@me popular
Read till the latest chapter and I can confidently say that it truly excites me. The idea is new and the flow is kept clean and precise. No bullsh8 as far as I've read. Makes me anticipate the future chapters.
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