It seems She has Become the First Love of the Impenetrable, Iron-Hearted Male Protagonist

I must say I'm impressed after finishing this novel. Although it started of a bit fast, I still understand nd the novel very well. It's all about coaching,  and it's interesting to see the POV of the man behind the famous athletes. It also contains host and system interactions which are not too many and for me, that is okay. If you're looking for a novel to pass the time, here's the novel for you.

I feel like would have enjoyed it more if it was written like a normal Novel and not something from the 80's, why exactly are you trying to complicate simple sentences with huge grammars, it's so off putting and annoying, couldn't focus at all.

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This storys premise is delightful except for the fact that i have no idea what is going on or what anyone saying or what theyre doing. Kid gets abducted because some people said theyd guve his parents money and hes like “sure” doesnt question anything. Then when theyre explaining there objectives within the worlds the dont feel coherent. This feels like it might continue to be a prevalent issue and while I understand that english might not be your first language I cannot reccomend this in good conscience.

great grammar*check* Nice build up *check* Great plot *check* Me adding to library *check* Over all great read so far and can't wait for more

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One of my favorite novels on the site. I decided to read it on a whim due to its name and was pleasantly surprised. The writing quality is pretty good with only a few mistakes and such. The stability of updates is the only thing I'm stuck on, but that's just because I want to read more of the story. Story development is really amazing and its nice how they haven't revealed what happens in the end yet. Character design is also amazing and I love the chemistry between the characters. World building is also really amazing with many unique tropes instead of just using overused cliches. Overall, amazing novel, highly recommend.

The story is promising for a sci fiction and there are light humor too. Author english is better than most of the stories around here. Readers should give this awesome story a chance as it has colorful characters and you will feel immerse into it.