Basically, it's a mess. The author is incoherent and the translator keeps making mistake with pronouns he/she, his/her.For example, MC is supposed to to have a lvl 80 character however it has the stats of a lvl 1 noob. If the level doesn't increase stats (like in 99% of games/stories) then author needs to say what it's used for.Also, this is supposed to be a game that transformed into a reality and sometimes, author says MC and his character act like one but the next moment he talks about keyboards...
A good novel at least for the few chapters it has.................It has potential to become the best r18 novel, and it seems the author has moved this novel at his patreon.
I've been waiting for this kind of story! Hurry up and vote, and if you know the raw, please post a link!πππππππππππππππππ
What can I say? They nailed this. It's great. It answered my question and gave me a laugh for my troubles. I think it's impressive how many chapters there are. I only read about seven of them.
The title is enough for someone to get interested in it.. Story is really good. It's a story which will affect directly in your heart... Good job author... I loved it...
Wohohoho nice this novel sure brought back some memories (for me). Hohoho shadow should update new chap since lot of viewers are waiting hohoho. But you story reallyyy interestingggggg. Gooodd jobbbb (οΎΞΏοΎδΊΊ))<(οΏ£οΈΆοΏ£)><(οΏ£οΈΆοΏ£)>
First off, I will say that the writing quality of this story is great. They do a lot of things right, and the story has many enjoyable parts. I find myself smiling quite a bit at sections of the story. That said, there are two glaring issues with this story that need to be addressed. First off, the reincarnation aspect of this story is basically pointless. The main character is a human who was born into the body of a dragon, so you'd think there'd be some difference between him and other dragons right? Nope. This MC no different from the others. Thinking like a dragon, acting like one, and is essentially dominated by his dragon instincts like 90% of the time. If you wondering if his human side is ever going to matter, you can safely put those thoughts to rest. He is a sociopath who lovingly plays with his family and then slaughters hundreds of humans with a smile on his face while complaining that it was too easy like all the others. He brings nothing new.In addition to this, it seems like the dragons in this story suffer from brain damage. They preach about keeping balance and how humans are using mana wrong. But they never try to explain anything to them. The dragons constantly complain about this problem as well, but they're causing the very issue they're trying to stop. The dragons also set up a training ground for young dragons to kill humans, but if humans ever win, they get butthurt and go destroy cities completely unrelated to the deaths and say: "Yeah! That's what you deserve!"What's worse is that these dragons think of themselves as wise and intelligent beings. And for the most part, they are. They even go out of their way to collect EXTENSIVE knowledge on specific human kingdoms. Yet somehow they can't grasp these very simple pieces of common sense.
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