Firstly I have to mention that this is a great novel with an intresting concept. The mc is not cliche and has a real personality and furthermore he is not flawless.He is an introvert but in reality he wants to socialise with others._Writing Quality_The writing quality is pretty good and there are very few mistakes (I am not an englsih native speaker so you probably will find more than I though)._Stability of Updating_The author posts a day, but sometimes he misses a day but makes up for it in the later days._Story Developpment_It has to be said that this is a slow story but as soon as he ~Spoiler~enters the new world the progress is normal.It is clear that the author has an idea for the plot and the story follows a clear "path"_Character Design_The characters are all interesting and have their own flaws.Even though you can guess the personality of a character, there are some plot twists which seem understandebal but unexpected.~Spoiler~Additionally you can see how the MC fights his asocial personality and socalises more and more-World Backround_The world has a clear structure and there is nothing that happens, that seems totally random. The wolrd is furthermore intresting and you want to know more abou it.All in all it is a fun read and you should give it a try.[At this point the story reached 73 chapters so far and things can change and this review would be inaccurate]I have to remind you that this is my first review so please do not blame me to much if you dont like it
The story was good well the translation. If the writer make the mc a lowkey person then why not make the mc live in a place with no cultivators and be a landlord or farmer. The daughters can be train and be discipline if they live in rural areas without arrogant people in it.
Great story, love the way it progresses and love how the magic and fighting works. The problem with the story is that the MC trusts to easily and tells his secrets without any back-up plans, he is not careful and everybody just accepts it like its normal. Good story, bad characters.
Someone said MC is kind and r-slur. Have read all the chapters, and I don't think that's true, the kind part is to some extent but the r-slur part? not sure if the guy even read the same story I did. But ok π.
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