It was a decent one for a couple of hundred chapters. One would have expected a weird sect like that of MC where all his disciples are his lovers without exception given the title, but what was really weird is that he did not have a single lover before becoming an immortal and now he almost behaves as a *** maniac. Ignoring all this, the story was a light and enjoyable read at the start.Then author starting writing another book and updates to this one became slow as a snail. So I skipped reading for a few months and came back to it. The latest chapters (200-240) have the first so-called "war" supposedly orchestrated by the MC. Long planning, execution running into nearly 40 chapters. The end result was that couple of (irrelevant) underlings of the main characters were killed, MC sneak attacked to kill a few of the competitors of his disciples who have been more-or-less engaged in a fair competition, and thousands/millions of bystander humans killed.I had thought that this whole scheme was to somehow kill the main perpetrators and beast traitors, but the above mentioned end result was perfectly in accordance with MC's plans. So MC managed to kill a couple of characters who are largely irrelevant, who were weaker than MC anyway and who could have been killed by some planned ambushes. Oh, and even the son of one of the main perpetrators was not killed because apparently it would bring a lot of trouble. So overall MC thought of this brilliant idea of orchestrating a huge war just to sneak attack these useless characters, killing thousands/millions of "ant mortals" in the process and even endangering his other body, wife and child. Go figure.
I am not sure what I was expecting from this novel from the description, maybe something like a comparison of human and monster cultures as part of an allegory for modern vs primitive societies. This story was way different then what I expected and I love it!!!The author has some issues with pronouns, but the character development is amazing. It hits that fine line between over exaggerated archetype and stoic realist that so many novels here lean twords. The author has found the happy medium between them.
Very fun story. The system itself leads to numerous opportunities for plot and the method of implements of the system makes it not so op as you might think. So far so good for a series hopefully it does not go down hill but go up hill meaning it gets better and better as the story keeps going on the longer it goes on.
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A little lizard scuttled over the forest floor looking for food. It looked around with its big golden eyes as the sun reflected on it hard golden scales on its back.
The Cracker was also going mad from the pain. It was said that pain changed people and showed to the world a different side of them. The Cracker was all bloodied, crying and looked like a small lost lamb in front of Griff.
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