In The End ⁂ H. Potter Twin

Great book, author's writing skill is really good along with the story, quite interesting and a very easy read, good job author and good luck

Really different and refreshing novel first it was kinda boring but after that it's just gold .Keep up the good work--------------------------

Trash, i only read a dozen chapter but the system is really limiting him, he only get few kill point but the price 9f the item is so high. Before rebirth he can reach half saint in his twenty. With this progress, i dont think he can reach it.For example he need 10.000 kill point to level from level 1 to level 2 qi stabilization realm. He only get 20 point for killing qi stabilization. Why can he cultivate normally i think he will progress faster

As of Chapter 38Writing Quality: 4/5Decent writing quality with some grammer mistakes here and there. This does not spoil the reading process at all. However, it is not perfect therefore a 4/5 rating.Story Development: 4/5 The progress of the story is pretty fluid so far. However, the meeting with his friend seemed abit rushed. Besides that the overall story progression is good. However, there feels like a few issues. For example in their first fight against the enemy. They said his friend teleported the group far away. However, the phrasing made it seem as if they got back to the mountain in no time. Besides that minir issue, the story was smooth.Character Design: 4/5The character design for the main character is mediocre so far. He shows a sense of nostalgia but it can be seen as he is not giving a strong vibe that he is himself yet someone else (might be confusing) which he should based of how the character is played. However, the side character is amazing as the show of hardship and stress really comes through to you. Update Stability: 5/5I do not know how fast and consistent  the updates are. I am just assuming that the updates are perfect and daily.World Background: 4/5Not much is known as the story is pretty short still. But a decent amount of information has been given. However, the power system seems one dimensional right now. As a somewhat wuxia story, there needs to be abilities or skills that enables the reader to visualise it. There also needs to be a form of crafting. Considering the titlte the MC has he should have all these bases covered. So i feel as if the world background is not fully out there yet.Overall: 4.2/5A good novel so far. However, this novel has alot of potential to become a great one. It has certain key moments that can pull in the reader as well have well rounded characters overall. This is a great story for people to pick up if they are in for the long run. I would personally say the biggest issue with this novel is the lack of chapters so far. As more chapters come in I will come out with a new review.  Good job so far with the novel 😁

Good read, hoping for more chapters!......................................................................................................................................................................................................

Fun to readThe MC is just an ordinary guy who suddenly got transported into the middle of nowhere. He does get scared but he's decisive. Understandable.Can't say much about the plot for now but his cheat is akin to having an RTS system in real life. He could recruit soldiers instantly and they even level up.Looking forward to the reaction of the natives once they interact with the village.

Good novel with OP MC and Likeable harem😉

I just loved the idea behind it, the concept was intriguing and the main character was well written, of course, there are places where it can grow, can't wait to see where this goes.