Imperium: Contractus

good story and good character building with solid future potential and can be developed further by having system

This book Is a master piece. I recommend that you read it. In other novels, the “Evil MC” is most of the time not evil at all. This novel’s MC is pure evil and thats what i like about thid nobel.

Give this one a four star review! Having read it before, I can never stop wondering WHAT happens NEXT!!shame the last update was right before the coronavirus outbreak. hope nothing happened. 😔

The narration style gives me vibes of an African woman narrating a legend to her kids or grandkids and I love it. it feels rushed but if this is maintained throughout the novel it can be a good and innovative as well as bold narration style. Great book.Only issue would be punctuation.the commas are excessive. maybe watch a YouTube video on how to use commas and full stop. There. A 5 star book will be born.

The Author here. If i don't rate it 5 stars who will?. Do please leave comments, I like to read them and more often then not they give ideas how to develop the story.

Much of the story doesn't make sense - at first.  Why is all the fighting turn-based?  Why do beasts still live after being killed?  Why are so many characters dumb?  Why do beast tamers get a monthly allowance?  Replace the phrase 'spirit beast' with Pokimons and it makes more sense.  All the main characters are children.

Good job on the plot. I like detective stories and action plots a lot, and I am looking forward to how its book works out. Good job author and keep up the good work. Good luck to you and looking forward to more chapters.

Even some of the older generation raised their eyebrows at this, they hadn't heard that Kushina was a member of the clan, a lot of people had the family name Uzumaki after all.