it could be a good story if the main character was not acting like a monkey all the time, he is pushing around and just when you think he is going to be a man he does everything his wife's family tells him for what? to be treated like a liar, a cheater and fool just so his wife might love him for 5 sentence and then be a bit*h to him again and again it's boring and stupid.
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Overall story seems to pretty good, but there is one issue that is continuously becoming bigger and more notifiable. Shun.Shun seems to have some kind of brainwashing skills because despite being suspicious, thief and clearly being able to take care of himself. Mc and Mei isn't kicking him out despite Shun just freeloading, and mc clearly doesn't want him there.It just so blatant forced plot point that it's becoming really irritating.
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The story seem lacking.the author makes essos seem weak and small and didnot have proper knowledge of GOT and how reality work.You should read Game of Thrones : The Norther Realms to get the feel of got.
Haven't started reading but let's get you started. Is MC strong to stronger or OP, or is this a child growing to teenager and then Adult like someone's life? Here is an apology.
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