something that irritates me is the fact that you say that he treasures his family but the first time when he actually considers his sister as his sister is after he went to the sixteenth heavens. thats pretty pathetic.
I really enjoy this novel bir for last 2/3 week there is no such a thing as updating stabilty ot 7 chap per week. I wish that there was a announcement option in here so that we would know if its on a break or not π₯
It has great story development with a very in depth world building. This is one of my favorite books and I come back everyday to read the new release chapters.
This book is a hidden gem! Although it's not suitable for ******* readers that don't really.like complicated novels that much but for me, I really do like it. If you want to have many readers then try to simplify your point. The characters might lack some development since its slow but I can handle it. I gave it a 5 star since I really do like genres like this. If I were a normal reader then maybe I'll leave a 4 to 3-star rating! Anyways continue writing and improving. Your grammars, tenses, and vocabulary that needed proofread for your book to be more appealing!
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I like it quite so far... I already read all released chapter so far. I like the way how you make the MC suffer to let the readers see that he is weak. .. Although the plot progresses in a faster way since it is just a few days since the Mc was transmigrate here, I like how the story develops. Good jod author. .Keep up the good work
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