I'm Forever on Hold (BL)

Definitely good stuff for getting lost in thoughtsMc doesnt have any special powers except his high iq and its a new break from the cliche isekai trope

at first, his mother and father, and sister thought he was dead in one of the chapters, but when he came back, his back as a god name nott and let see what'll happened. PS for author:I'm vary curious how they react of that he is "dead" i hope you can at least tell us in the near future,and all of them are 5 stars except for world background it is 4 stars.

well lets start reading mtl i'm in chapter 344 it really starts looking like nonsense............................    .......................

mc is so stupid and dumb AF and his strength development is slow as a turtle.i can't believe theres an mc of a novel who is so clueless and imbecile rofl

The novel is good. Alas, Webnovel's evil has been growing! Behold, a trial read with only 15 chapters! Terrible!                                    

Mostly posting a review because of the many grammar mistakes and misspelling of words. Try to find an editor if you can will still try to read your story but, find an editor ASAP.

The plot was refreshing as the concept is kind of new. Many opportunities to explore. The story does have potential. Character design is also okay.The only downside I found is that there very noticeable grammatical and writing errors. Not the worse I've seen but still a sore thumb. Overall with editing and proofreading this can immensely improved. Consider getting help in editing or try using tools and software on this area.

1. I got a dig bick2. You that read wrong3. You read that wrong too4. You checked5. You smiled7. You are wandering why you are still reading this8. You saw that mistake, right?(On 7)10. But did you see that I skipped 6?10. You checked11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 912. I said "saw you" not you saw13. I also skipped 214. You got tricked15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!