MC has very surface level personality. He doesn't really work for anything and things just fall into his hands. First day he goes out he finds a dungeon. Then he gets a weapon eating weapon with unlimited growth. Then he actually claims the dungeon. And when he goes to find a boss, he just gets a mythical skill. And at that moment I stopped caring and stopped reading
Cons The writing has some errors, most frequently with tenses and punctuation. There are no updates so that's a bummer. Pros (really more Cons, I tried)Story has some linear development, but there is no goal, no interesting plot; there is absolutely nothing to keep you engaged in the story. The world background was explained in the earlier chapters so that's great. However, in terms of scenery and alure. Flat 0. It's just.... The characters are just....
Oh a cultivation novel with a system? Is there gonna ever be a week that we don’t get one of these? Probably not because Chinese authors wanna be wuxia cultivators, they may even try to get hit by truck-kun just to try and go there Smh.
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Hello and an honest review from me. When I read your story, so far it has good writing but the paragraphs were too long so I might suggest if you could try to break it. Other than that, good job author👍🏻
I have a question if somone can answer it. is the mc a Pacifist as in dose he attack othere territorys/nobels/kingdoms and conquer them or he just develops his land and defend 🤔
This story is truly captivating. Please keep up the great work. I'm grateful it's free to read, and I'm eagerly looking forward to the next installment. It's refreshing to see a fantasy novel with such rich character development.
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