Alright, a review. Sure. I will rate this honestly and say, there is for now, basically no world background. It is something that will be done in the future.Characters: for now, we have a reason behind what characters do and so, they are fleshed out. I wouldn’t Give this a perfect score but it’s not bad for now.Plot: hmm, difficult. I am not exactly sure what the plot is, but from what I read, it’s About the MC and his psychopathic tendencies That require him to kill people, which he does in nice ways for now. I especially like the torture moments.Writing quality: some grammar mistakes might appear, but I will try to make sure Noworry releases no mistakes as much as possible. In short: trust my editorial And proofreading skills.
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The story gets interesting after 800 chapters.It's slow paced and the world introduction lasts 700 chapters .I have finished around 1300 chapters of raw.
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