Interesting read, so it might be good for it to go forward. MC is OP right now to those who are wondering, not sure if it's going to keep on being that way.
I hope I'm not annoying you with my questions.Is everything fine with you author?As one of your loyal fans I really admire the work done in this novel so I'm always longing for new chapters as many others of your fans.When can we expect the return of the story?Hope you do fine :) .Sorry if I'm annoying you.PS: (No ill intentions in my messages and I'm sorry for my bad English)
This story actually has no beard 😂😂😂But is good cultivation story. This story is almost a non stop cultivation adventurer. High ranked and as good as martial world.
I have gotten to about ch 195 on outside sites. This book is decent in both background and writing. However the character is just out of whack. He is straight but seems gay for the whole first 100 chapters. He is supposed to be super smart but never shows it. The skills he receives are broken for the first and doesn’t make sense. If I remember right the icy shot skill has a percent chance of working works every time when the mc wants it to happen!!! What is the point of the others then!!! Its just constantly annoying to hear the author say he is a genius when the mc shows zero signs of those traits. He even seems to be dense and slow with some of his reactions. Archers were able to jump along branches within the beginning days and the mc is a genius just from doing the same thing??!?!!! That’s not genius if many others are able to do the same!!! Don’t tell us he is a genius, show us!!!! He just seems like a regular protected child that doesn’t know the world well. Otherwise, love the story and the world building. Just take away the genius point and you will have a good story on your hands author.
Yea I'm liking this book so far. It's one of the everyone gets transported to another world but the mc has some kind of cheat trope, but I believe that if you enjoyed "The World Online" then I think you will like this book just like me. I can't wait to read more so I hope this book will get picked, but it's webnovel so probably not🤷u200d♂️😪
I like how the author made plot to tell the education related stuff, it's hilarious to me 😂 I had a good laugh. Give it a try to the chapters you got for free guys! Story development and character development are 2 things you can't underestimate in novel like this.
REVIEWNarration: Decent and immersiveWorldbuilding: Vast and detailedCharacter development: Nice and steadyCharacter design: OutstandingDialogues: Realistic and LifelikePacing: Not fast nor too slowWriting quality: MagnificentExecution of the Genre: Good pitchStory potential: HighUpdating Stability: SteadyMESSAGENow, this is an amazing work from a native speaker of English! I am very happy to meet one! Such an honour! I am so happy to read it as it was a roller coaster ride of twist and turns of emotions! Amazing work!ADVICEEdits for typos and the Capitalizations of the beginning of the sentence or dialogues. Not sometimes ending the dialogues with period or commas, exclamation or question mark. There were sometimes unnecessary spacings here and there The grammar was superb though! So feel proud of your work! Amazing! Peace ✌️ And use grammarly! It will help lessen obvious mistakes! 😉
holy sh!t.... is this really continuation strongest abandon son ( original one ) or is this ur own version ?.... ah i dun care... i'll read it as long as it's free bwahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
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