An only child, with both parents had long since passed on. We meet main character to this story. Jacob Fost, having enlisted into the military as a marine.
Honorable discharged in one of the many skirmishes due to saving the life of his fellow marines, and an accident that had left him with a bad leg and cloudy vision in his left eye.
Suddenly fixed, all due to the appearance of a 'System.'
Follow Jacob on his path of strange encounters, humorous deeds, and amusing thought processes.
(This is being rewritten.)
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the story is alright
issue (for me)
the system is not as idle as the title seem to be
and the date seems to be unnecessary considering the mc character (slow, don't want to deal with other)
as for the world building, i think its a bit grand to start from practically zero to universe.
and lastly the author comment is immersion breaking coz its too long. make it short and concise so it doesn't mix with the story
P.S. Author, please leave in the book's synopsis a Disc0rd or something to get in touch :) I would love to talk more or to know when more updates are coming.
The writing is good, some miner problem with word usage and spelling. The story is compelling and catches you up in it even though currently there are only 5 chapters.
MC is a veteran, apparently some type of special operations trooper, who has been wounded and medically retired. He has adopted the neighborhood that he lives in and appears to be seen as the "big brother" of the rough area.
Please Author-san, give us more....