Story is pretty good. The way that he awakens his powers may make you want to turn from the story but if you just ignore that the rest of the story is pretty good so far. I would recommend giving it a shot.
ok let me start by saying I like the idea and the fact there is not too much cliche that's a plus for me but the negative of this book is the fact that I can barely understand what is going on I seriously recommend getting an editor I tried reading it but it was tough like reading a mtl. so my review or constructive criticism is get an editor you need one bad but other than that I enjoyed the book
Hi! This is Molly, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.
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