I know you wrote that you stoped writting because of RL issues but couldnt it be good to write atleast 1 chapter a week or month until your sytuation will be stable? Then you could continue to write more.
I have a habit of noting down Pros and Cons when I give a book review.So starting with the Pros:I definitely feel there is an interesting plot here. I was curious to see where the main storyline actually began. You have written a good summary as well. It made me want to read on to get to the actual plot of the book. I feel you have good setup for your lead character for his eventual character growth. Guy is at this worst point and struggles with his current lifestyle. It gave me the impression that he'll eventually grow out of that and I was intrigued as to find out how he would do so.Now for the cons:There are a large number of grammar and punctuation mistakes throughout your book. It was almost jarring to read some of the setences because of this. You have also used many words incorrectly. I found several instances where you have used certain words which have a completely different meaning that what you intended. I would strongly suggest to recheck your earlier chapters because the mistakes there are quite vast. Lastly, I found the first 4 chapters to be very slow. Not much happens. I understand you were trying to show the readers that Guy is living in very bad conditions but honestly, it's been dragged on way too long. I was looking forward to get to the actual plot but it was chapter after chapter of Guy hating his life. Felt unnecessary.Overall I feel the amounts of mistakes I found definitely hindered the experience for me. I do believe this story could be very interesting, judging by the summary. I wish there was more focus on the plot and less dragged out descriptions of Guy's lifestyle. I wish you all the best because you have potential for improvement. I'd really like to give it another read once you've made a couple of changes.
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Yet another post-apocalyptic novel with a system (which apparently is a djinn in a lamp) - I am very positive about the novel, the MC is developing nicely, I like the Russian angle, the plot contains interesting twists for future development & the harem is kept at a minimum (regarding plot) - one important drawback though is the low release rate, I'd rather stop reading now and binge later.
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Leo opened his mouth to speak, but felt his lungs devoid of breath and his mind of words. Deep down, he had hoped for more understanding, a gesture of acceptance even, from the two brothers. They had always played in the confines of the walls and Leo had ever been the dreamer where Dane was the reliable one and Garren ever the jokester.
His gaze instantly transformed from an undecided one to a determined one and he... turned around and entered the tunnel "I've decided, I'll go to the colony. Humph it's because I'm sure my will is stronger than some stupid ant instincts, not because I fear that beast roar. Who knows, maybe with my superior intellect I will be able to submit all the colony and make them my slaves hehehehe".
You were hit with sparkles as everything around you was so clean and expensive. Your eyes hopped from one price tag to another. Discovering that one hat here would be enough for six months of rent.
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