it’s just the same story type that all chinese author make with no developing interest at all. the story is about a dude from the number 1 and greatest country china, big shock and only seeks to glorify it. it little about the story and all about china. maybe more think and original story telling instead of copy/paste junk.
For someone with golden finger he is so pathetic. He need to kill 325 monsters just for leveling to lv 2, and random player react lv 2 just a seconds after server open. The skill system also horrible
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The story is interisting the MC has a interisting backstory. the concept of mana and futures-tic concept is good the story is kind of slow at the moment and it might get into pace soon i think..the romantic bits are good the author did forget to add some details about the cataracts in between form what iian tell after reading. bit over all its a good read. i am waiting for the future chapters its getting interisting
The story is good. Not a lot of problems in grammer and story, The character design seems to be the best. The problem is with the updates. The author seems to rarely posts these days. Like, can I get a reply to when the next (non filler chapter) is gonna come by? I mean you should actually make the filler a part of the story, cuz it good . The posting schedule used to be 1 chapter per day but now it is like 1 chapter a month.The rest is perfect, I've been reading since the 11th chapter and gonna continue till the end.
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