I may enjoy a cold and evil MC, but there are several problems: 1st this is way beyond, I’ve read untill chapter 233 and he was the worst person in the whole novel, he is a complete sociopath2nd his personality is completely flat, he is like a robot, completely devoid of emotions, and incredibly boring. It gets tiring having a psycho MC if he never makes you laugh3rd and most important: the MC can be a total sociopath, but when the author tries continuosly to justify his choices with some cheap logic and a ridiculous view of the world that can be easily destroyed by anyone with a bit of common sense... well... that’s when u break the limit, if u want a spycho MC fine, but don’t try to make readers take his side as if he could be justify. He can’t and his logic is ridiculous and full of holes. I could go on, but, honestly it’s not worth it. I just add a last thing: the system of the nobles doesn’t make any sense, there is no wolrd were it could work it’s completely idiotic. Even if 99.9% of nobles are complete idiot that decides to keep any resource and technique for themselves there is bound to be someone who does not, and this someone would easily gain power, since it’s been clearly shown that there are countless genius among common people and just providing them the techniques would easily surpass all other powers that have an extremely low number of members die to their idiotic system. It’s impossible that a system that allows less than 1% of the population to cultivate with proper resources can go on for long, since granting proper techniques to common talented people would easily allow to create a way bigger force and it’s impossible that no one ever tried.
The author disseminates untruths about the Middle Ages, thinking that people did not wash when in fact they enjoyed baths, washed their bodies and hair, had good dental hygiene and washed their hands before and after every meal. The actor describes his MC as spreading handwashing which is completely ridiculous because it was common knowledge to wash your hands before and after every meal. The author is probably confusing the renaissance with the Middle Ages.
Translator quality is bad.There was a contradiction in chapter 2 which was due to poor translation. I just can't read anymore.As such i gave 1 star for translation quality and 3 stars for everything else.
The only reason I am giving this such a low rating is because the author dropped the novel. It is a great novel, but I dont reccomend simply because he dropped in the middle of it.
Chapters are way too short even when there’s a warning for it. Feels way too rushed since chapters are so short, every six to seven chapter combined I’d say is equal too around 1500-1800 words.
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