I Pulled Out Excalibur

This review is for new readers afraid to read this novel because of slow progress in realm.The slow progress in realms is manly because the power-system is completely training focused rather than resource-based so training can't be time-skipped. Usually in cultivation novels Authors can time-skip 500+ years of grinding since all MC needs to do is cultivate, gather qi in dantain and progress, so the training arc can be summarized in one line like "MC ate ying-yang pill and cultivated for 500 years and broke through."But this novel is complete science based martial novel where the only way to progress is by training and creating new martial arts unique to your martial path. And each new technique needs some source of inspiration, a training model with planning, followed by an elaborate training arc. And training-arcs in this novel are the BEST.The novel is slow but not lazy, author could had definitely time-skipped training arcs but then the technique would be way less impactful to readers.

Great story. The characters are interesting and their dynamics are fun. The world is expansive and well described. Even without ecchi scenes, the series is amazing.

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(1+3+1+3+2)/5=2The author's trying to put a novel together and mixing troupes from this and other genres. that's alright.and the author tries to be a chill dude who keeps in touch with his work and new comers.so being honestly critical starts to feel a little hard. The editing honestly hurts. for any defenders of this English; alright, we grew up with a completely different version of English. This doesn't match my experience with either American, British, Australian English or any other.I'm slightly confused as the few replies to my comments from the author led to me believing that he/she actually doesn't have a problem with English.side note if anyone is interested in a bit of reality. a woman who deals with stress for any amount of time wilts. The same goes for men. in other words they lose their aesthetic and raw sexual appeal. For a story and a fantasy's sake, i can see and mostly agree that it doesn't matter. I have however seen this so much that I'm now tired of it.stay healthy folks.

Finally a Novel about actual crime . I been looking for one of these for as long as I can remember.  Great characters and Premise . I only hope the author is of the No-Harem sect ......though I can't say I'd stop reading if he capped it at 2....Hope the realism stays true and I implore you to give it a try

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Ugh, I got dizzy by just reading the synopsis. My braincell can't keep up with it. Got to get out of here asap............Ugh, I got dizzy by just reading the synopsis. My braincell can't keep up with it. Got to get out of here asap............

You'll understand after reading a few chapters, especially the last few... I don't know how it was achieved but this novel with a good potential was ruined by the horrible editing.