This novel is... something else entirely. My main issue is that the author contradicts themselves continuously through the novel. The biggest example is the world. The author talks up this world where everyone is a 100x more intelligent than they are today, technology is very very advanced, and the MC is extra hard working (making him smarter than the average person). However, it's like everyone lacks common sense, especially the MC! He can remember obscure facts that he read in a book years ago, but it takes ~150 chapters and an advanced level teacher for him to think "wow maybe my skill can be used in ways that aren't described in a textbook." He is genuinely mind blown that he can use his modeling ability for things other than modeling buildings. Wtf.Also this sentence appears over and over again: "This is the age of origin ability!" I'm still reading because I hate myself, but if you're looking for a story that actually makes sense, this isn't the one you want.
This is my first time in this app and this is my first ever review here and I really like this idol story. I can't wait when Xander debuts and gets his revenge and especially when he reveals his true identity as the heir of Lee.
Story has an interesting take on the game elements and the characters have been given more development than the average Chinese xianxia, but the story can get a bit annoying at times when things aren't properly explained. My biggest gripe, however, is the frequent spelling and grammar mistakes. Some of these should be easily caught with a basic word processor, but many others are homophones or just similar sounding words that are not at all related. If these were infrequent I wouldn't mind so much, but they often occur several times a chapter or even multiple times in a sentence to the point it becomes illegible. Going over some of these earlier chapters to fix these mistakes would probably be a good idea to retain new readers.
I hope that this novel will be good. Your other novel is fantastic and is also a harem novel. So the harem in this novel will probably turn out great with all the experience you have.I don't have much more to say except that I hope that there will be as little science as possible in the novel.
"Are you sure you want to do this mistress?" Kellan asked. The vampire looked at her with so much love it was almost hard for her to meet his eyes. But she did. Cassandra placed a spiteful smirk on her face and squared her shoulders. Nothing was going to stop her today.
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